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With the red light flashing,
the baracades down,
the so near wistle screaching as it moves forward.  
Children playing stop to stare,
waving their arms in the air.
Going by, the wheels screaming
teh line up along the tracks is growing.
Traffic on teh other side,
slightly seen and waiting.
Looking, piece by piece dark green and brown flying bys
Polluted by colourful slander,
Minor vandalists leaving their mark with pride.
Leaving it for children to gaze up on,
innocent minds again tainted by teenage society.
Their slandercovering a once hapy feeling
a think that was worth getting excited about.
Memories burned to ruins...
and me standing silently... waiting for a return.
A glimmer of hope, or pride.  Not shame.
©2004-2009 ~Eschelle
:iconeschelle:

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This was inspired by my friend Danny, it is also dedicated to him.
Its not amazing but its in existence so i can't say too much !

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:iconnymphas:
hmmm, true but lacking the spirit, me thinks...

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:euphoria:

Everyone remembers Adam and Eve, but who remembers Lilith?

Obey the CowGOD!!! *thanks*

Nymphas is a part of this club: [link]
:iconeschelle:
thats the point, there isn't supposed to be any lol

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Daniel :smooch:

Proud mother to a beautiful baby boy~

Please take the time and look at my work...:zombie:
[Gallery]
:weed:
:iconsalohcin:
well if its not supposed to be anything its damn good at it lol...

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Join Me In The Darkness
We Have Pie!
:iconphothus:
Interesting... could be revised - Esp. spell-check/grammer (what can I say, I'm a Language Nazi). Good idea/subject, though; never seen it used before.

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That was a totally awesome xylophone solo.
:iconeschelle:
lol good ole language nazi's. I know there has to be major things ugly about it, but i just do things to fast and i never look over them so what you read is literally the original. Thank you for the great comment

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Daniel :smooch:

Proud mother to a beautiful baby boy~

Please take the time and look at my work...:zombie:
[Gallery]
:weed:
:iconeschelle:
lol indeedy!

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Daniel :smooch:

Proud mother to a beautiful baby boy~

Please take the time and look at my work...:zombie:
[Gallery]
:weed:
:iconmajindreams:
Pretty nice, and very true, sadly... Meh. Excellent work. ^_^

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:iconeschelle:
You should have seen my friend all he could do was stare, really heartfelt.

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Daniel :smooch:

Proud mother to a beautiful baby boy~

Please take the time and look at my work...:zombie:
[Gallery]
:weed:
:iconskedar1229:
This is true and I agree with what was said above...I haven't seen anything else like this before on the site...Great job!

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